Key Points From First Draft Feedback

Below are the positives and things that need improvements on from the feedback we received.

Positives

• Really good editing
• Amazing acting
• Good variety of shots
• Quality shots
• Eye contact good 

Improvements

• Not enough cut always
• Too many head turns
• First line lip sync
• Bad footwear - converse last scene
• Shots to long at the start
• Too much lip syncing
• Didn't like the wipes